I thought that was a great elevator pitch! I really liked how you lead up to your proposed idea with a story of your own. I think it was one that many people, especially women, can relate to. I also think you went into a good amount of detail of what would be offered in the workshop and how it would help everyone who attends. Maybe in your next one you could mention pricing and if would be a single session or a membership.
I think this was a great pitch. You provide the reason to join the workshop with a great hook. You also explain every detail of the service that is provided. You also provide a great close to the pitch. you should look in to what cost it would be to attend or will it be free seeing as many people could use the training.
Roksolana, I really enjoyed your elevator pitch. I thought you were very engaging in your pitch and definitely attracted attention. I think you could have probably used a more appropriate setting rather than your your closet but overall the content provided was great and made it a good pitch.
I thought your elevator pitch was really well done. I can especially relate to your opening statement of being fearful when walking home alone as a woman after a late night studying or working. Having that hook is essential as it introduces a viewer to your topic and helps them associate why it is important and an opportunity. You provided great details about the workshop as well but perhaps in the next elevator pitch you could touch on the financial aspect of the workshop in terms of costs and how it could gross a profit.
I thought that was a great elevator pitch! I really liked how you lead up to your proposed idea with a story of your own. I think it was one that many people, especially women, can relate to. I also think you went into a good amount of detail of what would be offered in the workshop and how it would help everyone who attends. Maybe in your next one you could mention pricing and if would be a single session or a membership.
ReplyDeleteI think this was a great pitch. You provide the reason to join the workshop with a great hook. You also explain every detail of the service that is provided. You also provide a great close to the pitch. you should look in to what cost it would be to attend or will it be free seeing as many people could use the training.
ReplyDeleteRoksolana,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your elevator pitch. I thought you were very engaging in your pitch and definitely attracted attention. I think you could have probably used a more appropriate setting rather than your your closet but overall the content provided was great and made it a good pitch.
Hi Roksolana,
ReplyDeleteI thought your elevator pitch was really well done. I can especially relate to your opening statement of being fearful when walking home alone as a woman after a late night studying or working. Having that hook is essential as it introduces a viewer to your topic and helps them associate why it is important and an opportunity. You provided great details about the workshop as well but perhaps in the next elevator pitch you could touch on the financial aspect of the workshop in terms of costs and how it could gross a profit.